Here’s a corrected version:
**Police to score train firms on tackling sexual harassment. The government will not impose financial or legal penalties on train operators who fail to meet the targets.**
Here’s why:
* **”will not be financial or legal penalties”** is grammatically incorrect. You need a verb that describes the action of the government *applying* the penalties.
* **”impose”** is a common and appropriate verb for applying sanctions or penalties. Other options could be “levy,” “introduce,” or simply restructuring the sentence to say “there will be no financial or legal penalties.”
* **”for train operators”** can be changed to **”on train operators”** for slightly better flow in this context when talking about imposing penalties.
